--- a/embellishing_a_plot.rst	Wed Sep 15 22:17:19 2010 +0530
+++ b/embellishing_a_plot.rst	Thu Sep 16 15:15:01 2010 +0530
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 
 on the terminal
 
-{{{ shit to terminal and type ipython -pylab }}}
+{{{ shift to terminal and type ipython -pylab }}}
 
 We shall first make a simple plot and start with decorating it.
 ::
@@ -28,8 +28,10 @@
 be nice if we could control these parameters in the plot. This is possible by
 passing additional arguments to the plot command.
 
+.. #[[Anoop: I think it will be good to rephrase the sentence]]
+
 The second argument that we shall be passing is colour. We shall first clear
-the figure and plot the same in red colour.Hence
+the figure and plot the same in red colour. Hence
 ::
 
     clf()
@@ -38,17 +40,24 @@
 Plots the same curve but now in red colour.
 
 To alter the thickness of the line, we use the =linewidth= argument in the plot
-command.Hence
+command. Hence
 ::
 
     plot(x, cos(x), linewidth=2)
 
 produces a plot with a thicker line.
 
-{{{ Show the plot and compare the sin and cos plots }}}
+.. #[[Anoop: I guess it will be good if you say that it affects the
+   same plot, as you have not cleared the figure]]
+
+{{{ Show the plot and compare the sine and cos plots }}}
 
 {{{ Pause here and try out the following exercises }}}
 
+.. #[[Anoop: is the above a context switch for the person who does the
+   recording, other wise if it an instruction to the person viewing the
+   video, then I guess the three braces can be removed.]]
+
 %% 1 %% Plot sin(x) in blue colour and with linewidth as 3
 
 {{{ continue from paused state }}}
@@ -58,11 +67,17 @@
 
     plot(x, sin(x), 'b', linewidth=3)
 
+.. #[[Anoop: add clf()]]
+
 produces the required plot
 
 #[Nishanth]: I could not think of a SIMPLE recipe approach for introducing
              linestyle. Hence the naive approach.
 
+.. #[[Anoop: I guess the recipe is fine, but would be better if you
+   add the problem statement rather than just saying "let's do a simple
+   plot"]]
+
 Occasionally we would also want to alter the style of line. Sometimes all we
 want is just a bunch of points not joined. This is possible by passing the
 linestyle argument along with or instead of the colour argument.Hence
@@ -88,6 +103,8 @@
 
 {{{ Pause here and try out the following exercises }}}
 
+.. #[[Anoop: same question as above, should it be read out?]]
+
 %% 2 %% Plot the sine curve with green filled circles.
 
 {{{ continue from paused state }}}
@@ -147,6 +164,8 @@
 #[Nishanth]: Unsure if I have to give this exercise since enclosing the whole
              string in LaTex style is not good
 
+.. #[[Anoop: I guess you can go ahead with the LaTex thing, it's cool!]]
+
 {{{ Pause here and try out the following exercises }}}
 
 %% 4 %% Change the title of the figure such that the whole title is formatted
@@ -210,6 +229,9 @@
 like to mark the point as and the argument after xy= is the point at which the
 name should appear.
 
+.. #[[Anoop: I think we should tell explicitely that xy takes a
+   sequence or a tuple]]
+
 {{{ Pause here and try out the following exercises }}}
 
 %% 6 %% Make an annotation called "root" at the point (-4, 0)
@@ -238,6 +260,6 @@
 Thankyou
  
 .. Author              : Nishanth
-   Internal Reviewer 1 : 
+   Internal Reviewer 1 : Anoop
    Internal Reviewer 2 : 
    External Reviewer   :