Language check Done for `getting started with for loop`
authorbhanu
Thu, 11 Nov 2010 00:22:53 +0530
changeset 473 7eaa550929a1
parent 472 fcdec2d28c9a
child 474 f137f3e036d9
Language check Done for `getting started with for loop`
getting-started-with-for/script.rst
--- a/getting-started-with-for/script.rst	Thu Nov 11 00:03:57 2010 +0530
+++ b/getting-started-with-for/script.rst	Thu Nov 11 00:22:53 2010 +0530
@@ -22,6 +22,7 @@
    Internal Reviewer   : Nishanth
    Internal Reviewer(2): Amit
    External Reviewer   :
+   Language Reviewer   : Bhanukiran
    Checklist OK?       : <put date stamp here, if OK> [2010-10-05]
 
 
@@ -31,7 +32,7 @@
 
 {{{ show welcome slide }}}
 
-Hello and welcome to the tutorial getting started with ``for`` loop. 
+Hello and welcome to the tutorial `Getting started with ``for`` loop`. 
 
 {{{ switch to next slide, outline slide }}}
 
@@ -156,7 +157,7 @@
 
 it means that it is not part of the ``for`` loop and the lines after
 that doesn't fall in the scope of the ``for`` loop. Thus each block is
-separated by the indentation level. Thus marking the importance of
+separated by the indentation level and that marks the importance of
 white-spaces in Python.
 
 {{{ switch to the slide which shows the problem statement of the first
@@ -204,8 +205,8 @@
 	print "is", sqrt(each)
 
 Now we have finished the statements in the block, and still the
-interpreter is showing four dots, which means you are still inside the
-block. To exit from the block press return key or the enter key twice
+interpreter is showing four dots, this means that you are still inside the
+block. To exit from the block press the return key or the enter key twice
 without entering anything else. It printed the square root of each
 number in the list, and that is executed in a ``for`` loop.
 
@@ -252,7 +253,7 @@
 
 {{{ switch to the next slide, ``range()`` function }}}
 
-Okay! so the main thing here we learned is how to use Python
+Okay! so the main thing that we learned here is how to use Python
 interpreter and IPython interpreter to specify blocks. But while we
 were generating the multiplication table we used something new,
 ``range()`` function. ``range()`` is an inbuilt function in Python