getting-started-with-arrays/script.rst
changeset 318 a45256cc5404
parent 304 d98f554bbec0
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--- a/getting-started-with-arrays/script.rst	Wed Oct 13 11:15:37 2010 +0530
+++ b/getting-started-with-arrays/script.rst	Wed Oct 13 12:52:11 2010 +0530
@@ -11,29 +11,56 @@
 .. * array operations 
 ..   + =+ - * /= 
 
+.. Objectives
+.. ----------
+
+.. Clearly state the objectives of the LO (along with RBT level)
+
+.. Prerequisites
+.. -------------
+
+..   1. Name of LO-1
+..   2. Name of LO-2
+..   3. Name of LO-3
+     
+..  Author: Anoop Jacob Thomas <anoop@fossee.in>
+    Internal Reviewer   : Puneeth 
+    External Reviewer   :
+    Checklist OK?       : <put date stamp here, if OK> [2010-10-05]
+
 ===========================
 Getting started with Arrays
 ===========================
 
+.. #[Puneeth: Prerequisites and Objectives are missing. Fill them in]
+
 {{{ show the welcome slide }}}
 
 Welcome to the spoken tutorial on getting started with arrays.
 
 {{{ switch to next slide, outline slide }}}
 
-In this tutorial, we will learn about arrays, how to convert a list
-into an array and also why an array is preferred over lists. And array
-operations.
+In this tutorial, we will learn about arrays, how to convert a list into an
+array and also why an array is preferred over lists. And array operations.
+
+.. #[Puneeth: Fix the grammar above.]
 
 {{{ switch to next slide on overview of array }}}
 
-Arrays are homogeneous data structures, unlike lists, arrays cannot
-have heterogeneous data elements, that is, it can have only one type
-of data type, either all integers, or strings, or float, and not a
-mix.
+Arrays are homogeneous data structures, unlike lists, arrays cannot have
+heterogeneous data elements, that is, it can have only one type of data
+type, either all integers, or strings, or float, and not a mix.
+
+.. #[Puneeth: Use multiple short sentences, rather than one long sentence
+   I would've written something like this. 
 
-Arrays are really fast in mathematical operations when compared to
-lists, it is at least 80 to 100 times faster than lists.
+   Unlike lists, arrays are homogeneous data structures. They can have only
+   type of data, ....]
+
+Arrays are really fast in mathematical operations when compared to lists,
+it is at least 80 to 100 times faster than lists.
+
+.. #[Puneeth: For what size of an array is that the comparison?
 
 {{{ switch to the next slide, creating arrays }}}
 
@@ -42,39 +69,63 @@
 I am assuming that you have your IPython interpreter running with the
 ``-pylab`` option, so that you have the required modules loaded.
 
+.. #[Puneeth: 'I am assuming' doesn't sound right. Ask them to open if it
+.. is not open?]
+
 To create an array we will use the function ``array()`` as,
+
 ::
 
     a1 = array([1,2,3,4])
 
-Notice that here we created a one dimensional array. Also notice the
-object we passed to create an array. Now let us see how to create a
-two dimensional array. Pause here and try to do it yourself before
-looking at the solution.
+Notice that here we created a one dimensional array. Also notice the object
+we passed to create an array. Now let us see how to create a two
+dimensional array. Pause here and try to do it yourself before looking at
+the solution.
+
+.. #[Puneeth: I don't think this question can be solved by an average
+.. viewer. Questions during the tutorial, should generally be to re-iterate
+.. concepts learnt? ]
+
+.. #[Puneeth: Also, you didn't even point out that we are converting a
+.. list, using the ``array`` function. Bring the later section about
+.. converting a list, here. A separate section is not necessary, IMHO.]
 
 This is how we create two dimensional arrays.
+
 ::
 
     a2 = array([[1,2,3,4],[5,6,7,8]])
 
+.. #[Puneeth: Again, you could explain a bit about the fact that we are
+.. converting a list of lists.]
+
 Let us see an easy method of creating an array with elements 1 to 8.
+
 ::
 
     ar = arange(1,9)
 
+.. #[Puneeth: say, creating the same array as before. for some time I got
+.. confused .]
+
 And it created a single dimensional array of elements from 1 to 8.
+
 ::
 
     print ar
 
-And how can we make it a two dimensional array of order 2 by 4. Pause
-here and try to do it yourself, try ``ar.tab`` and find a suitable
-method for that.
+.. #[Puneeth: be consistent with voice. say, we obtained... or something.]
+
+And how can we make it a two dimensional array of order 2 by 4. Pause here
+and try to do it yourself, try ``ar.tab`` and find a suitable method for
+that.
 
 {{{ switch to next slide, reshape() method }}}
 
-We can use the function ``reshape()`` for that purpose and it can be
-done as,
+We can use the function ``reshape()`` for that purpose and it can be done
+as,
+
 ::
 
     ar.reshape(2,4)
@@ -84,14 +135,15 @@
 {{{ switch to next slide, creating array from list}}}
 
 Now, let us see how to convert a list object to an array. As you have
-already seen, in both of the previous statements we have passed a
-list, so creating an array can be done so, first let us create a list
-``l1``
+already seen, in both of the previous statements we have passed a list, so
+creating an array can be done so, first let us create a list ``l1``
+
 ::
 
     l1 = [1,2,3,4]
 
-Now we can convert the list to an array as,
+Now we can convert the list to an array as, 
+
 ::
 
     a3 = array(l1)
@@ -101,70 +153,96 @@
 
 Create a three dimensional array of the order (2,2,4).
 
+.. #[Puneeth: s/order/shape or size ?]
+
 {{{ switch to the next slide, shape of an array }}}
 
 To find the shape of an array we can use the object ``.shape``, let us
 check the shape of the arrays we have created so far,
+
+.. #[Puneeth: s/object/method ?]
+
 ::
 
     a1.shape
 
-``a1.shape`` object is a tuple, and since a1 is a single dimensional
-array, it returned a tuple (4,).
+``a1.shape`` object is a tuple, and since a1 is a single dimensional array,
+it returned a tuple (4,).
+
+.. #[Puneeth: first show a 2D array, so that it becomes easier to explain.
+.. Also, the word ``tuple`` need not be mentioned. ]
 
 {{{ switch to the next slide, unsolved exercise 2 }}}
 
 Find out the shape of the other arrays that we have created.
 
+.. #[Puneeth: solution missing.]
+
 {{{ Array can have only a single type of data }}}
 
-Now let us try to create a new array with a mix of elements and see
-what will happen,
+.. #[Puneeth: I guess, this whole section can be skipped. If you want to
+.. keep this, just briefly mention that arrays are homogeneous in the
+.. intro, don't explain it there.]
+
+Now let us try to create a new array with a mix of elements and see what
+will happen,
+
 ::
 
     a4 = array([1,2,3,'a string'])
 
-Well, we expected an error as previously I said that an array can have
-only homogeneous elements, but it didn't give an error. Let us check
-the values in the new array created. In your IPython terminal type,
+Well, we expected an error as previously I said that an array can have only
+homogeneous elements, but it didn't give an error. Let us check the values
+in the new array created. In your IPython terminal type, 
 ::
 
     a4
 
-Did you notice it, 
+Did you notice it,
 
 {{{ switch to next slide, implicit type casting }}}
 
-{{{ highlight all the array elements one by one using mouse 
-movements }}}
+.. #[Puneeth: typecasting may be unnecessary. (Also too advanced?) an
+.. average guy wouldn't use arrays with strings.]
+
+.. #[Puneeth: You may want to mention that float is the default dtype.]
 
-all the elements have been implicitly type casted as string, though
-our first three elements were integers.
+{{{ highlight all the array elements one by one using mouse movements }}}
+
+all the elements have been implicitly type casted as string, though our
+first three elements were integers.
+
+.. #[Puneeth: when I type a4 it says some ``dtype`` etc. I don't understand
+.. what it is, can you explain? ;)]
 
 {{{ switch to the next slide, identity & zeros methods }}}
 
-An identity matrix is a square matrix in which all the diagonal
-elements are one and rest of the elements zero. We can create an
-identity matrix using the method ``identity()``.
+.. #[Puneeth: something needs to motivate this. why are we suddenly talking
+.. of an identity matrix?]
+
+An identity matrix is a square matrix in which all the diagonal elements
+are one and rest of the elements zero. We can create an identity matrix
+using the method ``identity()``.
 
 The function ``identity()`` takes an integer argument,
+
 ::
 
     identity(3)
 
-As you can see the identity method returned a three by three square
-array with all the diagonal elements as one and the rest of the
-elements as zero.
+As you can see the identity method returned a three by three square array
+with all the diagonal elements as one and the rest of the elements as zero.
 
-``zeros()`` function accepts a tuple, which is the order of the array
-we want to create, and it generates an array with all elements zero.
+.. #[Puneeth: You say array here, matrix there -- it's a bit messed up.
+.. Clarify, explicitly.]
 
-{{{ switch to the next slide, problem statement of the solved exercise
-1 }}}
+``zeros()`` function accepts a tuple, which is the order of the array we
+want to create, and it generates an array with all elements zero.
 
-Let us creates an array of the order four by five with all the
-elements zero. We can do it using the method zeros,
-::
+{{{ switch to the next slide, problem statement of solved exercise 1 }}}
+
+Let us creates an array of the order four by five with all the elements
+zero. We can do it using the method zeros, ::
 
     zeros((4,5))
 
@@ -216,8 +294,7 @@
 
     a
 
-We can use all the mathematical operations with arrays, Now let us try
-this
+We can use all the mathematical operations with arrays, Now let us try this
 ::
 
    a1 = array([1,2,3,4])
@@ -229,20 +306,25 @@
 
     a1 * a2
 
-Returns an array with element by element multiplication, notice that
-it does not perform matrix multiplication.
+Returns an array with element by element multiplication, notice that it
+does not perform matrix multiplication.
 
 {{{ switch to next slide, summary slide }}}
 
-So this brings us to the end of this tutorial, in this tutorial we
-covered basics of arrays, how to create an array, converting a list to
-an array, basic array operations etc.
+So this brings us to the end of this tutorial, in this tutorial we covered
+basics of arrays, how to create an array, converting a list to an array,
+basic array operations etc.
+
+.. #[Puneeth: s/how to create an array/creating an array]
 
 {{{ switch to next slide, thank you }}}
 
 Thank you!
 
-..  Author: Anoop Jacob Thomas <anoop@fossee.in>
-    Reviewer 1:
-    Reviewer 2:
-    External reviewer:
+.. 
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