--- a/accessing-pieces-arrays/script.rst	Mon Nov 08 01:54:34 2010 +0530
+++ b/accessing-pieces-arrays/script.rst	Mon Nov 08 01:56:03 2010 +0530
@@ -16,11 +16,12 @@
 
 ..   1. getting started with arrays
 
-     
+.. #[anand: internal reviewer not mentioned]     
 .. Author              : Puneeth
    Internal Reviewer   : 
    External Reviewer   :
-   Checklist OK?       : <put date stamp here, if OK> [2010-10-05]
+   Language Reviewer   : Bhanukiran
+   Checklist OK?       : <06-11-2010, Anand,  OK> [2010-10-05]
 
 Script
 ------
@@ -126,12 +127,11 @@
   
   C[-1] = 0
 
-Now, how do we access one column of C? As with accessing
-individual elements, the column is the second parameter to be
-specified (after the comma). The first parameter, is now replaced
-with a ``:`` to say, that we want all the elements of that
-dimension, instead of one particular element. We access the third
-column by
+Now, how do we access one column of C? As with accessing individual
+elements, the column is the second parameter to be specified (after
+the comma). The first parameter, is replaced with a ``:``. This
+specifies that we want all the elements of that dimension, instead of
+just one particular element. We access the third column by
 
 ::
   
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@
 
 to get the elements of rows indexed from 0 to 3, 3 not included
 and column indexed 2. Note that, the index before the colon is
-included and the index after it is not included, in the slice that
+included and the index after it is not included in the slice that
 we have obtained. This is very similar to the ``range`` function,
 where ``range`` returns a list, in which the upper limit or stop
 value is not included.
@@ -269,11 +269,10 @@
 
 gives the elements [21, 31, 41, 0]
 
-Note that when specifying ranges, if you are starting from or
-going up-to the end, the corresponding element may be dropped. So,
-in the previous example to obtain [11, 21, 31, 41], we could have
-simply said, 
-::
+Note that when specifying ranges, if you are starting from the
+beginning or going up-to the end, the corresponding element may be
+dropped. So, in the previous example to obtain [11, 21, 31, 41], we
+could have simply said, ::
 
   C[:4, 0]
 
@@ -323,7 +322,7 @@
 
 %%5%% Obtain the square in the center of the image.
 
-Following is an exercise that you must do. 
+Please, pause the video here. Do the exercises and then continue. 
 
 {{ show slide containing Solution 5 }} 
 
@@ -383,7 +382,7 @@
 
 gives the elements [[12, 13, 14], [0, 0, 0]]
 
-Now, that we know how to stride over an image, we can drop
+Now, that we know how to stride over an array, we can drop
 alternate rows and columns out of the image in I. 
 ::
 
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