--- a/getting-started-sagenotebook/script.rst Thu Nov 11 02:55:20 2010 +0530
+++ b/getting-started-sagenotebook/script.rst Thu Nov 11 03:00:19 2010 +0530
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
.. #. Be able to evaluate cells, create and delete cells, navigate them.
.. #. Be able to make annotations in the worksheet
.. #. Be able to use tab completion.
-.. #. Be able to use code from other languages in the cells.
+.. #. Be able to use code from other languages in the cells.
.. Prerequisites
.. -------------
@@ -30,10 +30,10 @@
Script
------
+{{{ Show the slide containing the title }}}
+
Hello friends. Welcome to this spoken tutorial on Getting started with
-sage and sage notebook.
-
-{{{ Show the slide containing the title }}}
+Sage and Sage notebook.
{{{ Show the slide containing the outline }}}
@@ -57,9 +57,10 @@
We are assuming that you have Sage installed on your computer now. If
not please visit the page
http://sagemath.org/doc/tutorial/introduction.html#installation for
-the tutorial on how to install Sage. Let us move on now.
+the tutorial on how to install Sage.
-On the terminal type::
+
+Let us now learn how to start Sage. On the terminal type::
sage
@@ -81,8 +82,8 @@
{{{ Intentional *cough* *cough* }}}
to use Sage and nothing else! The Sage notebook also provides a
-convenient way of sharing and publishing our work which is very handy
-when we use Sage for research or for teaching.
+convenient way of sharing and publishing our work, which is very handy
+for research and teaching.
However we can also run our own instances of Sage notebook servers on
all the computers we have a local installation of Sage. To start the
@@ -319,5 +320,3 @@
Hope you have enjoyed and found it useful.
Thank you!
-
-