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 <div class="section" id="call-for-papers">
 <h1>Call for Papers</h1>
-<p>We welcome contributions from the academic world as well as the industry. 
-We look forward to your submissions on the use of Python for scientific 
-computing and education.  This includes pedagogy,  exploration, modeling and 
-analysis from both applied and developmental perspectives.</p>
+<p>We look forward to your submissions on the use of Python for Scientific
+Computing and Education. This includes pedagogy, exploration, modeling
+and analysis from both applied and developmental perspectives. We 
+welcome contributions from academia as well as industry.</p>
 <div class="section" id="submission-of-papers">
 <h2>Submission of Papers</h2>
-<p>If you wish to present, please submit an abstract of between
-300 and 700 words should describe the topic and motivate its
-relevance to scientific computing.  Depending on the number
-and quality of submissions, the conference organizers will
-allot between 10-30 minutes for all accepted talks.</p>
-<p>In addition, there will be an open session for lightning talks
-during which any attendee willing to do so is invited to do a
-couple-of-minutes-long presentation.</p>
-<p>If you wish to present a talk at the conference, please follow 
-the guidelines below.</p>
+<p>If you wish to present your paper using this platform, please submit
+an abstract of 300 to 700 words describing the topic, including its relevance
+to scientific computing. Based on the number and quality of the submissions,
+ the conference organizers will allot 10 - 30 minutes for each accepted talk.</p>
+<p>In addition to these talks, there will be an open session of lightning talks,
+during which any attendee who wishes to talk on a pertinent topic is invited to 
+ do a presentation not exceeding five minutes in duration.</p>
+<p>If you wish to present a talk at the conference, please follow the guidelines below.</p>
 </div>
 <div class="section" id="submission-guidelines">
 <h2>Submission Guidelines</h2>