# HG changeset patch
# User Puneeth Chaganti <punchagan@fossee.in>
# Date 1289424320 -19800
# Node ID 68c324a9981c079b10a67b57a0f8e2c2939a1dc2
# Parent  9a1c5d134feb1f38b8f53d305989217179e840d5
Reviewed using sage to teach

diff -r 9a1c5d134feb -r 68c324a9981c using_sage_to_teach/script.rst
--- a/using_sage_to_teach/script.rst	Thu Nov 11 02:04:14 2010 +0530
+++ b/using_sage_to_teach/script.rst	Thu Nov 11 02:55:20 2010 +0530
@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@
 Script
 ------
 
-Hello friends and welcome to the tutorial on "Using SAGE to teach"
+{{{ Show the slide containing title }}}
 
-{{{ Show the slide containing title }}}
+Hello friends and welcome to the tutorial on Using SAGE to teach
 
 {{{ Show the slide containing the outline slide }}}
 
@@ -41,14 +41,14 @@
 ::
 
     t = var('t')
-    p1 = plot( e^(-t/2) * sin(2*t), (t, 0, 15))
+    p1 = plot(e^(-t/2) * sin(2*t), (t, 0, 15))
     show(p1)
 
 Now if we want to reduce the damping factor even more, we would be using
 e^(-t/3). We can observe that every time we have to change, all we do is change
 something very small and re evaluate the cell.
 
-This process can be automated using the ``@interact`` feature of SAGE.
+This process can be simplified, using the ``@interact`` feature of SAGE.
 
 ::
 
@@ -141,10 +141,10 @@
 in the top right, we can see a button called ``publish``. Click on that and we
 get a confirmation page with an option for re publishing.
 
-For now lets forget that opion and simply publish by cliking ``yes``. The
+For now lets forget that option and simply publish by clicking ``yes``. The
 worksheet is now published. 
 
-Now lets signout and go to the sage notebook home. We see link to browse
+Now lets sign out and go to the sage notebook home. We see link to browse
 published worksheets. Lets click on it and we can see the worksheet. This does
 not require login and anyone can view the worksheet.
 
@@ -173,9 +173,8 @@
 
 {{{ Show the "sponsored by FOSSEE" slide }}}
 
-#[Nishanth]: Will add this line after all of us fix on one.
 This tutorial was created as a part of FOSSEE project, NME ICT, MHRD India
 
 Hope you have enjoyed and found it useful.
-Thankyou
+Thank you!