# HG changeset patch
# User bhanu
# Date 1289068446 -19800
# Node ID 525ae0d74e47320db14966a0c52349847819e091
# Parent  4a6d548d4369250f77d95cc2f5fce56dcef7ba85
checked the language for `loading data from files`
and check list done by Anand.

diff -r 4a6d548d4369 -r 525ae0d74e47 getting-started-ipython/questions.rst
--- a/getting-started-ipython/questions.rst	Sat Nov 06 19:18:54 2010 +0530
+++ b/getting-started-ipython/questions.rst	Sun Nov 07 00:04:06 2010 +0530
@@ -181,6 +181,6 @@
 ----------------
 
 .. A minimum of 2 questions here (along with answers)
-
+..[[Anand: Long answer questions required]]
 1. Question 1
 2. Question 2
diff -r 4a6d548d4369 -r 525ae0d74e47 getting-started-ipython/script.rst
--- a/getting-started-ipython/script.rst	Sat Nov 06 19:18:54 2010 +0530
+++ b/getting-started-ipython/script.rst	Sun Nov 07 00:04:06 2010 +0530
@@ -17,6 +17,7 @@
      
 .. Author              : Puneeth 
    Internal Reviewer   : Anoop Jacob Thomas<anoop@fossee.in>
+   Language Review     : Bhanukiran 
    External Reviewer   :
    Checklist OK?       : <put date stamp here, if OK> [2010-10-05]
 
@@ -95,11 +96,11 @@
 10*2``.  We use the up arrow again to navigate to the previous command
 and use the left arrow key to move the cursor on to the + symbol and
 then use the delete key to remove it and type 0 and * to change the
-expression to the required one.  We hit enter to see the output of
+expression as required.  We hit enter to see the output of
 ``print``. 
 
 Now, let's say we want to use the function ``round``. We type ``ro``
-at the prompt and hit the tab key. As you can see, the IPython
+at the prompt and hit the tab key. As you can see, IPython
 completes the command. This feature is called the tab-completion.
 
 Now, we remove all the characters and just type ``r`` and then hit
@@ -176,7 +177,7 @@
 
 We get 2.0, 2.5 and 2.48, which are what we expect. 
 
-Let's now see how to correct typing errors that we make when typing at
+Let's now see how to correct typing errors that we make while typing at
 the terminal. As already shown, if we haven't hit the enter key
 already, we could navigate using the arrow keys and make deletions
 using delete or backspace key and correct the errors. 
diff -r 4a6d548d4369 -r 525ae0d74e47 loading-data-from-files/script.rst
--- a/loading-data-from-files/script.rst	Sat Nov 06 19:18:54 2010 +0530
+++ b/loading-data-from-files/script.rst	Sun Nov 07 00:04:06 2010 +0530
@@ -14,9 +14,11 @@
 
 .. 1. getting started with ``ipython``
      
+.. #[Anand: author and internal reviewer  not mentioned]
 .. Author              : 
    Internal Reviewer   : 
    External Reviewer   :
+   Language Reviewer   : Bhanukiran
    Checklist OK?       : <put date stamp here, if OK> [2010-10-05]
 
 Script
@@ -96,7 +98,7 @@
 ..   cat /home/fossee/pendulum.txt
 
 .. #[Nishanth]: The first column is L values and second is T values
-                from a simle pelculum experiment.
+                from a simple pendulum experiment.
                 Since you are using the variable names later in the
                 script.
                 Not necessary but can be included also.
@@ -133,7 +135,7 @@
 
 Notice, that L and T now contain the first and second columns of data
 from the data file, ``pendulum.txt``, and they are both simple
-sequences. ``unpack=True`` has given us the two columns in to two
+sequences. ``unpack=True`` has given us the two columns into two
 separate sequences instead of one complex sequence. 
 
 {{{ show the slide with loadtxt --- other features }}}