# HG changeset patch
# User amit
# Date 1285226212 -19800
# Node ID 069d4e86207e64add41d833f114968a15d826143
# Parent  6b1efb74d91454c28f8d76202fd05d7237be7edc
review for getting started with for

diff -r 6b1efb74d914 -r 069d4e86207e getting_started_with_for.rst
--- a/getting_started_with_for.rst	Thu Sep 23 12:29:30 2010 +0530
+++ b/getting_started_with_for.rst	Thu Sep 23 12:46:52 2010 +0530
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
 
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-In this tutorial we will see ``for`` loops in python, and also cover
+In this tutorial we will learn about ``for`` loops in python, and also cover
 the basics of indenting code in python.
 
 .. #[Nishanth]: Instead of saying basics of indenting code,
@@ -38,6 +38,9 @@
                 advantages like neat code can be told after completely
                 explaining the indentation
 
+.. #[Amit]: Do you want to do that here. May be its better to talk about 
+   this after some initiation into the idea of blocks. 
+
 A block may be defined by a suitable indentation level which can be
 either be a tab or few spaces. And the best practice is to indent the
 code using four spaces.
@@ -264,6 +267,14 @@
 Python, indentation, blocks in IPython, for loop, iterating over a
 list and then the ``range()`` function.
 
+.. #[Amit]: There does seem to too much overhead of details. Should
+            the first example be done using script is it necessary. 
+	    Do add some things in evolutionary manner. Like introducing 
+	    range as a list and doing a very very simple for loop.Like
+	    iterating over [1,2,3] .Before getting into a problem.
+	    And club details about problem in one paragraph and syntactic details
+	    in other.
+
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 Thank you!